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Wednesday 2 July 2014

Ipsep Lloyd and his enemy




Once upon a time there were three males and there names is chucky,lloyd,zane in my dream they had lot of lollies and they lived in  candy world and it full of people dancing about how amazing is the world. They was wearing funny costume and there were different people and they are bad when the three men saw the king.when the three men was talking to the king and king said I will destroy your candy world for ever and three mens was crying ipsep LLoyd and he conquered his fear and he help his own enemy to ask them to fight the other bad enemy. When Lloyd got his candy sword he grabbed his amazing helmet made from the ninja world when chucky got up and called the ninja what Do you want from us then chucky said we need your help to fight the bad enemy.Then ninja said How Much will you give me 1000$ and the ninja said it a deal and chucky Said hurry up And fight. When zane stop crying he conquer his fears and he told his mum and dad to go to the safest country and mum said be save my biggest chubby bunny and zane said don't worry mum okay when chucky got some bomb he through it to the bad enemy and the bad enemy lost the war and candy world celebrate their war And they gave the ninja $1000 and the ninja was really proud of there money Because they won the WAR!!!!!!! And king was really angry because they lost Their war because they are really bad we hate you from the three men the End

3 comments:

  1. Hi Richard,

    What a creative story! I'm glad the ninja won the war! :)

    Ms. Sakumoto

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  2. Dear Richard,

    We are so proud of you, well done, very nice story, keep it up💖

    From Kim, Talia, uncle and me (auntie Millie)

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  3. LOL NICE NINJA STORY!!!! -KYRON

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